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Friday 23rd April 2021

Posted: Apr 23, 2021 by: Emma Barker (EBarker) on: Class 2

This week we've started our new book - The Mousehole Cat. Although we have't actually read it - we've been concentrating on this picture:

Then we've written a description of the picture. I asked the children to really think about their sentence starts and we used the alphabet to try to encourage us to use a different start each time. Here's Tommy so far...

A peaceful breeze sways on the coast. Boats are floating along the sea. Calmly, the man is tying up a bag. Down on the beach, there are some seagulls. Expectantly, the cat is looking at the bumpy hills. Fluffy clouds are floating off through the blue sky. Gently, the breeze is moving the sea to push the boats. How does the wind flow through the air? Just then, the man sees a red canoe. 

I hope that you agree that this is fabulous writing! Well done Tommy!

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